Social Media and Self, Global Revision Process

I spent the last 50 minutes carefully analyzing the comments made by both my peers and my teacher. I allowed for significant changes in the structure of my paper. I added more claims and properly asserted my stance on the topic. I went back to my sources to search for references that better supported my claims and ideas. I allowed for major updates to my paper. Although there are still some edits I need to make. I believe that the current edits I have made on structure and source integration have progressed my paper significantly.